Thoughts just make me wonder
Pain seeps into the life
Sometimes the smile I remember
But it fades as lights arise
Well what to say of it
Is it pain or hate that I feel!
Can I stand up and look far!
Can I smile and breathe
I walk on like a life which just goes on
Even when I touch or feel
In my sense its just nothingness that creeps
At times when I am lost and confused
Like now like forever
I just speak to my dead dreams
Even they fade away from me
Well what to say of it
Is it pain or hate that I feel!
Can I stand up and look far!
Can I smile and breathe
Thoughts just make me wonder
Pain seeps into the life
Sometimes the smile I remember
But it fades just fades away .... Like a tree with its last leaf
6 comments:
If u can recall any of the day, wen some stranger just crossing by you passed u a warm smile. That makes your entire day, same way u can make any strangers day by passing a sweet smile....So smile, and d satisfactory feeling will make you breathe... :)
interesting take on things :)
listen to Whitney houten song Exhale (Shoop shoop )..it says it all :)
DEAR AUTHOR,
Yes true, tree sometime in worst time shades leafs but coz of rain and right sunlight the tree grows and leaf comes. similarly u got to think like that...if something happened wrong with u will u hold on to it..
What u need to do is to think positive.. if you read your poem u will get some negative vibes as it talk about pain and confusion which is their in your mind at present....
true...but sometimes the pain is of not having that feeling which made you feel alive...holdin on just keeps u closer to the feelings and thus a lil difficult to let go off
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