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Thursday, February 5, 2009

What I Could Have Been!

You took some of me from me

And now I don’t even know what I could have been

Dreams didn’t come true

My heart just turned blue


My eyes fill up with tears when in my mind I still hear

The words that you had said to me

When you were close to me and when you walked away from me


I can’t clearly think or find

What it is that you left behind

I am lost like a bird in the sky

When winds have changed and directions redefined


Why is it I still dream of you

And worst I cherish every dreaming moment of you

I find it hard to wake myself up

Knowing there’s no way I would find you, like I find you there


I am not sure what I am turning out to be

Without you by my side to tell me all that I could be

I fear my own mind, cause’ alone there’s nothing I define

What I lost I can’t find

What I have keeps slipping out of my mind


Being lost was fine till there was hope in divine

But hopes been burnt the dreams been shattered

On my own doorsteps my heart stopped the flutter


My mind is filled with haze my eyes are all dazed

What could I have been had you stayed with me

A rhetoric in my mind is what I could have been had you stood by me


Knowing I can’t find an answer that would define

How my life could have been

Which went away as you walked away

Taking from me some of me and what I could have been

5 comments:

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Anonymous said...

tht was touchy!!

Anonymous said...

When i read it...I got tears rolling in my eyes, I am able to figure out how sensitive you are dear...
You are a good person.

MiNdless RamBling said...

thanks a lot guyz! some how there's a very thin line between being sensitive and being a fool...sometimes when we write it becomes a little easier to decide which way we are heading ..and somehow writing things out makes me feel a bit more relaxed and free...may be sharing wht one feels is not that bad an idea :)

Anonymous said...

Being sensitive is never wrong, except that one needs to be senstive hot just for himself/herself; but for others too...

Just saw another blog on very similar lines; can send you the link if you are interested..