Sit here and talk to me
...tell me what you feel.
Get up lets walk around
let me show you what i seek...
There's always time for things,
but sometimes it fall shorts.
Not cause it ends in between,
but cause we just fall apart.
Don't let the moment go,
it might never come around again.
Don't let the sun go down,
we might not stand through the day.
Not saying I can't stay,
but promise I will not.
I know that its rude to say,
but can't find a better way to remark...
I could stay here forever
if you just say the right words.
Though they might not mean as much
if spoken when they are asked!
You can take your time,
but don't just let it flow...
Remember we came here a long while ago!
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Dear Author,
it occurs that in your tryst to find that missing piece,you would be/are missing on lot more things in life like the peace of your mind.Most of the times it so happens that we just keep on searching for folks whom we have dreamt about our entire lives and end up missing upon people with whom our paths crossed and touched our lives; folks who would have loved to talk to you and hear u as well.
Very truly said -"Don't let the moment go,
it might never come around again." . Do you implement it in your own life?
Nice poem :)
very well said :) ... in reality this is an extract of what i tend to say to myself put across in a form where i am not me and thus making it easier to spell it out :) as u can surely infer i surely haven't implemented the same in life...funnily rite now it seems more like self preaching rather than a thought put across ... thnks fr the compliment at least someone takes out time to put in a comment..even though tht someone is anonymous :))
This one was really somethng lot of us cud relate, at least I can, wanted to add one point, in life we come across strangers who can understand us much better than ppl we are usually seeking for...try to sort them out, if we miss on them, that becomes a real loss, keep writing, ur next post will be awaited.. :), cheers!!
@Author:Being anonymous at times is easy and the appreciation becomes more genuine or atleast I think so.Cheers!
@anonymous2:very true thought. Its always better to sort out than to have opinions and assumptions. Sadly enough though we do it daily in our professions, we miss doing it in our personal lives.
well i think there is something story like about someone being a stranger and understanding u...but don't really think tht happens a lot..nt to me atleast...though perhaps strangers can easily tend to believe they understand but for them some times u r an observation rather a person...it doesn't stay the same when they r not a stranger any more...then they have opinions about u rather than jst pointers! anyways evryone's a stranger before we get to knw them...so i think its more abt knowing which stranger u wud wnt to knw more and which u shud just remain strangers...
sadly enuff what u say is right..but life is way more complicated to sort than work..work u have an objective..smething laid out infront of you to achieve..the only question tht remains is how not "what" or "why"...i think life's more abt 'what' and 'why' than 'how'...'how' like a nice kid, just takes care of itself :)
Would juss say 'Ur good at coming up with reasons for all sort of stuff ;)'
well what i can say to that...may be its not abt coming up with a reason but being able to present what i perceive as the reality...it does give lots of answers!
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